Friday, October 21, 2022

How being dumb makes you rich

Alex In My Inbox #36
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Hey friend, happy Friday!

Welcome to Edition 36 of Alex In My Inbox brought to you by MarketerHire.

Alex In My Inbox is a weekly copywriting series where I share interesting, actionable, and hilarious copywriting tips from "Alex."

Alex is an anonymous copywriter who shares these tips with me so that I can share them with you.

Today, Alex has an email about why you should try to be dumber…so that you can be richer. 

It may not make a ton of sense right now, but that's what we're here for. Alex breaks it down. 

Let's get into it.

Dear Chase, 

I watched this sick YouTube video yesterday and I've been thinking about it ever since. 

It's called The Art Of Dumbing Down. 

It's more geared toward musicians – telling them how they can get mass appeal by rapping like Lil Pump instead of Kendrick Lamar. 

But I wanna take the lessons from the video and make it about copywriting. Because this is gonna help a lot of people. 

You and I always talk about how you need to write at a third-grade reading level. 

I don't always do that, especially if I'm writing to your audience. 

Your subscribers are smarter than most. 

But when you're trying to reach as many people as possible and have your message widely understood, you need to sound like an idiot.

I have a friend who does $1M a month with a coaching business. Which means his margin is close to 80-90%. Which means he personally clears 8 figures a year. 

You'd think that someone who makes that much money would have Naval-level wisdom. 

You'd think that he's giving away high-level game that nobody else is giving away. 

Nope. 

He talks like a kid. It's actually cringe. 

He's using hooks in his TikToks that were popular 10 years ago. 

"They don't teach you this in school!!!!!"

It's crazy. 

For this email, I was actually going to plug Hemingway App again (not sponsored) but the tool doesn't even work for me. 

I stole a tweet from @vanyakairos, one of my favorite Twitter accounts and plugged it in here to see what we'd get. 

This is not a 3rd-grade reading level. This is like a 50th-grade reading level. I'm a professional writer and I don't even fully understand what he's saying.

So, we have a few options for making sure that you're writing at a level that everyone can understand. 

1. Make friends with dumb people.

The key here is to have dumb friends that don't know they're dumb. There's no one dumber than a dumb person who thinks they're smart. 

Get them to read through your copy and make adjustments where necessary. 

If they start to fumble with certain sentences, you gotta do better. 

Make sentences shorter, use simpler words. Do what you gotta do to make your dumb friends understand your copy. 

2. Talk out your copy.

The way I write is not really the way I talk. 

I write a lot better. I talk like an idiot. 

If you can talk out the benefit points of your product, record it, and then put it on paper, it's going to sound dumber. But that's a good thing. 

The way you talk it out will be the way that it'll make the most sense for someone when they read it in their head. 

Try it. It actually works. 

3. Don't be afraid to sound cringe. 

Like I mentioned above, that guy who does $1M a month makes some cringe content. 

But so does Mr. Beast. And he's basically a billionaire. 

When you see the people that have the broadest appeal, they're all a little cringe. 

Go to Facebook right now and read a post from your cousin who's 33 years old with two kids, has a mortgage, and loves Disneyland. 

That is the average person. 

They're not nuanced. They're not that smart. 

NPCs. Bots. 

Make stupid jokes (within reason). 

Make references to The Office. 

Use exclamation marks! A lot!!!

The best swipe file is the IG captions of the people you went to high school with. 

Regular people. That's who you're speaking to. 

I hope this made sense. 

If it doesn't, I'll put it through Hemingway App again. 

Yours truly, 

Alex

Sent from my Nintendo DS

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